Hey, MusiqSoul,
That sounded great! Keep up the good work.
The only thing that occurred to me is that you might want to get a real bass player to play exactly the same part you have there - it's a great bass part, I just think it would sound better with a real bass player. Some of the drums seem to me to be a little too 'up front' - maybe some of that could be more atmospheric. You'll probably be adding a bit of tasteful reverb to some of the tracks, I guess.
Just a few thoughts. I really liked it, you've got a fun musical imagination, and keep up the music - sounds great.
(BY the way, I really appreciated your post on setting up a studio)