I agree with BigBlackDrummer and Zelevo's comments. Nice job overall but the things they pointed out would make it better.
The snare is way to tight/small. A nice 14x5 or 5.5 nickle-plated brass or copper snare would have set it off... even a wood snare with a medium to medium tight tension. This song calls for a more open snare sound played behind the beat. Micheal White, Billy "Shoes" Johnson (Maze featuring Franky Beverly), Sonny Emory (EWF) style.
Keep doing growing man.