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T_Keys

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Please critique a track I made
« on: December 08, 2006, 10:00:47 AM »
Whats up LGM,

I recently sequenced this track as part of a contact I had for a childrens choir- I ended up doing several tracks for accompanying their singing and this is one of them.

So, tell me what you think and if there is anything I should change ( I have untill the 17 dec to turn these in).

This song is The Little Drummer Boy.

http://www.box.net/public/c6l2k3eq97

Thanks

oh, by the way my arrangments are copyrighted, so please dont steal my stuff
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Offline cbanks1

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Re: Please critique a track I made
« Reply #1 on: December 08, 2006, 12:40:29 PM »
Tight, I like the Timpini's, they add such  a dramatic effect..I'm currently listening..production is Tight.
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Re: Please critique a track I made
« Reply #2 on: December 08, 2006, 02:46:03 PM »
Quote from: T_Keys on December 08, 2006, 10:00:47 AM
Whats up LGM,

I recently sequenced this track as part of a contact I had for a childrens choir- I ended up doing several tracks for accompanying their singing and this is one of them.

So, tell me what you think and if there is anything I should change ( I have untill the 17 dec to turn these in).

This song is The Little Drummer Boy.

http://www.box.net/public/c6l2k3eq97

Thanks

oh, by the way my arrangments are copyrighted, so please dont steal my stuff


This is really tight doc!
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Re: Please critique a track I made
« Reply #3 on: December 09, 2006, 12:09:23 AM »
Sounds good, the only thing, I think, to fix is to lower the volume on the Epiano sound.

It stands out too much.

Other than that, it sounds good. :)
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Re: Please critique a track I made
« Reply #4 on: December 09, 2006, 09:45:57 PM »
Hey T-Key, I think it sounds very nice. Well planned and layed out.  I looking forward to posting some tracks in the future. thanks for your advice about the home studio. God bless and Keep the lord first and He will continue to bless you to make these good tracks.


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Re: Please critique a track I made
« Reply #5 on: December 09, 2006, 10:02:05 PM »
Praise God,

Very very nice track.  Keep on Glorifying God.
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Re: Please critique a track I made
« Reply #6 on: December 09, 2006, 10:08:58 PM »
Quote from: Derik on December 09, 2006, 12:09:23 AM
Sounds good, the only thing, I think, to fix is to lower the volume on the Epiano sound.

It stands out too much.

Other than that, it sounds good. :)

Derik- my contact person wanted the EP boosted... on earlier versions it was an acoustic guitar, but the lady said switch to EP, and then she wanted it louder  ?/?


To everyone, thanks for your supportive comments. You have no idea how this helps me and others that worked with me!!!
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Re: Please critique a track I made
« Reply #7 on: December 09, 2006, 10:22:34 PM »
Quote from: T_Keys on December 09, 2006, 10:08:58 PM
Derik- my contact person wanted the EP boosted... on earlier versions it was an acoustic guitar, but the lady said switch to EP, and then she wanted it louder  ?/?


To everyone, thanks for your supportive comments. You have no idea how this helps me and others that worked with me!!!

I wonder why EP? I think it sound better with guitar like you had it the first time...you think you can change the patch to guitar for me? I would like to hear what it sound like when you can. :)
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Re: Please critique a track I made
« Reply #8 on: December 10, 2006, 01:12:19 AM »
Quote from: T_Keys on December 09, 2006, 10:08:58 PM
Derik- my contact person wanted the EP boosted... on earlier versions it was an acoustic guitar, but the lady said switch to EP, and then she wanted it louder  ?/?


To everyone, thanks for your supportive comments. You have no idea how this helps me and others that worked with me!!!

She is crazy!  :)
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Re: Please critique a track I made
« Reply #9 on: December 10, 2006, 09:44:39 PM »
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Re: Please critique a track I made
« Reply #10 on: December 11, 2006, 12:57:17 PM »
Quote from: ddw4e on December 09, 2006, 10:22:34 PM
I wonder why EP? I think it sound better with guitar like you had it the first time...you think you can change the patch to guitar for me? I would like to hear what it sound like when you can. :)


I havent had a chance to go to my studio, and change it to guitar, but here you can listen to an earlier version of the song, I was just messing around with some ideas...

http://www.box.net/public/05a27ai1ma
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