Some song to pick for my FIRST song post on LGM eh?

The arrangement for this song is so beautiful though, so I had to write it.
LEMME KNOW WHATCHA THINK!
Angels-Richard Smallwood
Key-Eminor
Opening vamp:
G#/G#-B-E
A/G-B-C#-E
D-A-D/F-A-D
G-D-F/B-D-G
C-G-C/C-E-G-A#
F#-E/C#-F#-A#
B/B-D#-F#-A
E/A-B-D-E
E/G#-B-E
Through dangers seen A-D-G/C-E-G
and unseen, there's pro-D-A/C-F-A
tection G-D-F/A-D-G
all a-C-G-C/G-A#-C-E
round. (REPEAT FOR THIS PART: Under the refuge of God's wings, security is found.)
C,/E
For B,A,/F#
there G,/G
are F#-C/C-E-F#-A
AnA#/A#-D-G
gels B/B-D#-F#
watching Eb/Eb-G-B
you /A
to E/D-F#-A
keep /G
you F#/E
in /A
all G,/G
of /G
your A/G-C-E
ways, keeeping A/C-E-G
you from B/D-G-B
stum /B
bling,C/C-E-G-A
so /G
don't F#/A#-C#-F#
be /E
afB/A-D#-F#
raid. God's appointed.....
Then you play the same chords in the vamp that opened the song.
I didn't do the part that goes "All Night, All Day" etc.
That part's pretty easy.
whaddyathink?