it was pretty good...but how come u always want ppl's opinion on your music?
...if he can take the constructive portions of the criticism and use it to get better...he will have been very wise for asking!...I would take the way you played that song and feel for more movement with in each phrase that is being sung.....for example one movement per 8th note for each phrase....in the organ section there are many organ video snippets as examples that you can get ideas from....
..for example...I recorded about 15 different videos right from the organ section...converted the files and burned it to a dvd so I could let them play all the time to get ideas of how experienced organists move....Trina Train (spelling may be off) is my favorite!
