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violist2009
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« on: March 31, 2009, 12:41:41 PM » |
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This makes me nervous posting lyrics to the whole world but ok...Here goes
I haven't got all the music figured out yet but will post when i do...so here goes...
(BTW wrote this about 6 months ago and i'm only 17 so excuse some of the childish lyrics)
ALL I WANT
Verse 1
When I fall down on my knees,
and I cry out for Your grace.
That's when You look down on me.
And you say that it's all okay.
Because when I hear your voice
I know that you are there.
And then i decide that
Chorus:
You are everything I want
Your everything I need
You are all my heart's desire
And i long to worship you.
Interlude(instrumental solo to bring back in the A structure)
Verse 2:
In the cold and in the dark
You fill me with the Fire
And as I fell the Warmth
I finally look to you and say
to chorus
Bridge
I just want to see You
I just want to know You
I just want to Worship You
(x2)
Because - To chorus
so thoughts?
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LyricTenor
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« Reply #1 on: April 06, 2009, 04:59:25 PM » |
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You should NNNNNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVV VVVVVVVVVVVAAAAAAAAAAAA bke ashamed/timid when the Lord gives you a song. Share it. Neva know to whom it might minister.
I feel much sincerity in those words. Keep it up.
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violist2009
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« Reply #2 on: April 08, 2009, 01:32:19 PM » |
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Thanks Lyric.  |
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LyricTenor
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« Reply #3 on: June 16, 2009, 07:03:55 PM » |
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Thanks Lyric. Anytime. I know how it is to write a song you've bkeen given. ESPECIALLY when it tears your "inner" me all to pieces. TRUST!! |
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SketchMan3
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« Reply #4 on: June 24, 2009, 11:26:28 PM » |
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Wow, this is really beautiful. For some reason when I read the lyrics I hear a Relient K style melody (the soft acoustic kind, not the punk kind). I'd love to hear this performed.
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Why is there no "Gospel Ukulele" forum?
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ddw4e
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« Reply #5 on: July 01, 2009, 11:39:01 AM » |
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Simply beautiful!
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 MERCY EN!! |
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MissMusic04
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« Reply #6 on: July 10, 2009, 10:27:03 AM » |
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Wow! I love the words. Powerful. Keep us informed. I would love to hear this with music.
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LaRue1212
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« Reply #7 on: July 14, 2009, 11:02:16 AM » |
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Love it, honey, LOVE IT!
But, have you had it copyrighted yet?
I'm sure the writers and musicians can tell you more about it than I can, but in general, I don't think it's such a good idea to post lyrics to an unprotected song. 
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LyricTenor
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« Reply #8 on: July 15, 2009, 04:46:40 PM » |
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jdeyebrows
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« Reply #9 on: December 27, 2009, 10:43:22 AM » |
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This is a really great song. Like you I am often nervous about revealing my works online. You can do a search on self publishing sites. Some are free and allow you to publish a private work which can serve as a filing system which shows the date created and the author. I'm sure this is not as powerful as copywriting the material, but perhaps it can offer some form of proof which would be a comfort to you. Contact me if you would like the website that I use. I am not an affiliate, so I don't benefit for recommending this site.
God Bless,
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Jonathan Daniel
http://www.jdandtina.com
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