Blacklw234,
Here's my feedback on your video.
First of all, very good job with that! Let me go over each of the elements with a focus on how to help you make something that's really good even better. Some parts of what I say will be opinion / personal preference of how to do something, so feel free to ignore if it doesn't fit where you want to go.
TECHNIQUE. Excellent! I would suggest you lead with a 10-15 second clip of what the final product should look and sound like. Sort of the picture on the package that entices people to pick up the box.
INSTRUCTION. Started out strong, wandered a bit, then finished strong. I loved the part about having your thumb look up at you. I've been working with my 11 yr old and I have had real difficulty explaining to him how to hold his thumb. Today he will be introduced to the "thumb looking up at you" approach. You did a very good job of explaining that the left hand plays the notes, mutes, and does hammer-ons. You did not explain HOW to mute. You need to do that, since that is a crucial part of getting the feel and the tone. As I was watching the video I noticed that in your demonstrations you were doing a lot of hammer-ons and I was thinking "dude, you gotta explain hammer-ons, you gotta explain hammer-ons, you gotta...." then you did. The point is, I think you realized that that's what you were doing so you went ahead and explained it. Another reason why I think you would benefit from doing a short piece up front that includes the techniques you intend to cover.
You said you didn't know why hammer-ons are called that, then you explained it perfectly. Last thing. You GUARANTEED results in a specific timeframe. Personally I'd steer shy of such a promise.
Those are just my thoughts. Very nice video.