Ok, so, I've been talking about making video game music recently, but now I'm really stuck.
This is supposed to be a boss battle song. I thought it was good until I took a break from it, listened again, and realized there was a lot of undesirable dissonance, so I went back and tweaked it. This is the tweaked version (the problem with tweaking is that things can start to become a lot less consistent, trying to fit all the parts together).
As musicians(or not), do you think the progressions are too disjointed? And any other C+C you can give is appreciated.
