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Title: A NEW Upbeat track!! A MUST-HEAR!! and critique!!!
Post by: b_jizzle20 on December 22, 2007, 11:16:57 PM
Wuzz LGM fam!! ;D :)

This is another track I made on FL studio, its similar to the background music on Jermain Griggs' personal message on www.hearandplay.com, thats where i heard it from and i liked it so i made a track similar to it. Show sum luv and feel free to comment or critique!!!!


Holla!!!! 8) 8)
~B_jizzle20~

http://www.learngospelmusic.com/media/displayimage.php?album=282&pos=2
Title: Re: A NEW Upbeat track!! A MUST-HEAR!! and critique!!!
Post by: b_jizzle20 on December 29, 2007, 01:50:56 PM
Aye, where's everybody at???
Title: Re: A NEW Upbeat track!! A MUST-HEAR!! and critique!!!
Post by: KurzLand on January 14, 2008, 12:39:46 AM
Nice!

When are you adding bass and other instruments?
Title: Re: A NEW Upbeat track!! A MUST-HEAR!! and critique!!!
Post by: b_jizzle20 on January 14, 2008, 05:44:25 PM
OOPS! the link changed because i added another track

heres the right link
http://www.learngospelmusic.com/media/displayimage.php?album=282&pos=3




Nice!

When are you adding bass and other instruments?



Thanx!....the bass is already there, as for other instrument what do you think i should add??
Title: Re: A NEW Upbeat track!! A MUST-HEAR!! and critique!!!
Post by: BroAllan on January 17, 2008, 06:44:45 PM
Beautiful playing man!!  Keep up the good work!!  ;)
Title: Re: A NEW Upbeat track!! A MUST-HEAR!! and critique!!!
Post by: KurzLand on January 17, 2008, 10:19:29 PM
OOPS! the link changed because i added another track

heres the right link
[url]http://www.learngospelmusic.com/media/displayimage.php?album=282&pos=3[/url]





Thanx!....the bass is already there, as for other instrument what do you think i should add??


Sorry. Couldn't hear the bass with cheap speakers I have at home!

They are both good. Maybe a little percussion and organ and brass section on the second track.
Title: Re: A NEW Upbeat track!! A MUST-HEAR!! and critique!!!
Post by: docjohn on January 19, 2008, 08:11:55 AM
very cool!!! how did you do the drum tracks? great ,real sound
Title: Re: A NEW Upbeat track!! A MUST-HEAR!! and critique!!!
Post by: DeeMee on January 19, 2008, 01:01:50 PM
Cool track bro. Overall, real decent. I would just try to clean it up a little, a couple of timings things here and there, tweak and play around with the mix a little more. But still cool. Have never tried out Fruity Loops but seems to be a nice software package.
Title: Re: A NEW Upbeat track!! A MUST-HEAR!! and critique!!!
Post by: b_jizzle20 on January 19, 2008, 01:18:55 PM
very cool!!! how did you do the drum tracks? great ,real sound

Thanks FAM!!
(well...If you worked with FL) I downloaded samples and imported them into FPC and played them from my midi controller.



Cool track bro. Overall, real decent. I would just try to clean it up a little, a couple of timings things here and there, tweak and play around with the mix a little more. But still cool. Have never tried out Fruity Loops but seems to be a nice software package.


Thank ya, Sir!!

Yeh i was just noticing that it is a bit sloppy. But at the time i was making it was making it, I wasnt really hearing like im hearing now. lol

I know with more experience i will develop a better ear. :)


Thanks again for the feedback FAM!! 



Beautiful playing man!!  Keep up the good work!!  ;)

Thank ya Sir!!! :)