Nice post. I like it and tried chaning up the ending a little to give it a more symmetrical feel.
Here's what I did:
Your ending:
---2-----------------------
------5--4--3------------
My ending:
--2--5--4--3-----------
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Basically, I just played the same 5-4-3 pattern on the same string instead of shifting. Thanks again for the post!
God Bless,
-J