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Offline emusiq

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« on: March 10, 2004, 05:45:12 PM »
B3 Wannabe gave me a great idea to post some of my chords to see if anyone had suggestions to make them better.  The chords here could probably help some begginers out too!
Thanks!
Oh, I understand all notations (chords, numbers ect..)

Jesus get'n us ready (Ab)
(LH)---(RH)

B,C,Eb,F,Ab --- B,C,Eb,F,Ab (single notes)
Ab F# --- C Eb F Ab
C F# ---C Eb F Ab
Ab C# F --- C Eb F Ab
D F --- B D F Ab
Eb Ab --- Bb C# F Ab
gospel bounce
Ab F --- B D F Ab
Ab F# --- C Eb F Ab
Ab F --- B D F Ab
Ab F# --- C Eb F Ab
Ab F --- B D F Ab
Ab F# --- C Eb F Ab
Ab F --- B D F Ab
Ab F# --- Eb F# Ab B (great)
Ab F --- B Eb F Ab (day)
A D ---F# C E Ab
C# --- B Eb F Ab(HOLD)
F,F# ---
G --- C E F# B
Ab ---B Eb F Ab(hold) OR with rt hand (B Eb F#)
Bb --- (Ab C# F)
B --- (F# B Eb)
C --- (F Bb C#)
C# ---
D --- B D F Ab
Eb Eb --- Ab C# F Ab
C --- C Eb Ab
C# --- C# F Bb
D --- D G B
Eb --- Eb Ab C
---F F (octaves)
---E E
---Eb Eb
C# G C --- E E (alternate the E's fast)
--- Bb,B,Bb,Ab,F,Eb
Ab --- C Eb F# Ab
this has to be very fast single notes
---D, Eb, B (the B is with the pinky,and D with the thumb)
--- Eb, D
--- C# Bb (together)
--- B, C, Ab
Here is something like preacher chords, the right hand is very fast
F# C F ---F, B (walk it down fast!)
---E, Bb
---Eb, A
---D, Ab
---C#, G
---C , F#
F B Eb ---B, F
Eb A Eb --- D, Eb Ab (Eb and Ab together)
--- C, C# E, Ab F
D Ab Eb --- Ab
C F# --- F# Ab B Eb Ab
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« Reply #1 on: March 10, 2004, 05:48:26 PM »
emusiq Thanks for you contribution.
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« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2004, 05:13:28 AM »
I don't usually read chord posts--matter of fact I RARELY read them...especially long ones, but I'll take a look at yours.

If you could make a midi or mp3 to go along with it, it would be much better. I listen to all the music files and watch all the videos.

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« Reply #3 on: March 21, 2004, 05:15:34 AM »
Is this the congregation song?

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« Reply #4 on: March 21, 2004, 03:39:46 PM »
I just skimmed over it. It's very "gospely". :)
I usually do mine in between a jazz and gospel sound. Some of the chords that I used in my "Praise the Lord Everybody" video, http://www.brownfloyd.com/bgallery/displayimage.php?album=18&pos=1 , I use for this song too.

Try starting the song on C, Eb or F like this:

C-E / Bb-Eb-Ab (Jesus)
Db-Ab / Db-F-Ab (gettin us)
Eb / C-Eb-Ab or Gb-Bb-Db-F (ready for that...)

Eb-Db / C-Eb-Ab (Jesus)
Db-B / Db-F-Ab (gettin us)
C-Bb / Eb-Ab-B or C-E / Eb-Ab-B (ready for that...)

F-Eb / C-Eb-Ab (Jesus)
E-D / Db-F-Ab (gettin us) *This ones from memory. You may have to adjust it*
Eb-Db / Eb-Ab-B (ready for that...)

I'll let you play with that. :)

Also, do you play the organ or piano/keys? I use slightly different changes on them.

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« Reply #5 on: March 22, 2004, 10:07:34 AM »
Thanks B3 Wannabe.  I'm a little slow with responding (until I get a computer at home), But yes it is a congregational song, very gospely.  I'm taking these chords home now to incorporate them into my music.  Thank you :D .  
oh, next time I'll just write chord names instead of spelling out the chords until I can make an Mp3. sorry for making it so long

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« Reply #6 on: March 23, 2004, 11:27:54 AM »
B3 Wannabe, I'm still working with those chords. Between the second and third chord, in each case, a B dim chord fits right? I also watched your video, which by the way is tight.  I noticed on the first clip you moved to a F chord before your fourth chord. That was nice!  The second clip blew me away with those jazz progressions/improvs!! Thanx
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